Monday 23 December 2019

SLJ Week 1 Day 2

Hi guys. This is SLJ Week 1 Day 2 :) ENJOY!

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Alodia, I hope you’re having a groovy day so far!

    My name is Eliza and I’m working as a blog commenter on the Summer Learning Journey this summer. Have you done the Summer Learning Journey before? I’m looking forward to reading your posts and the other bloggers' posts from the Ako Hiko cluster, over the next few weeks! If you want to know more about me, you can check out my blog.

    Thank you for doing all the week one, day two activities! I love how much thought, effort, and creativity you put into your posts. I also really like how you make slideshows to display your work - it is really clear and easy for me to read - keep it up!

    Firstly, thanks for sharing those facts about Jean Batten or Amelia Earhart. Your post taught me a lot about both pilots. Ka pai on making an awesome venn diagram too. Have you been on a plane before? If so, where did you go? Do you think you’d like to fly a plane if you had the chance to?

    Secondly,I think your poem is fantastic! I like how you chose to do a haiku, it is simple but effective! The image you’ve used is beautiful too. If you had the chance to go to the moon, would you go?

    Thirdly, thanks for sharing the story about the motorcyclist who saved the rabbit from the fire, he sounds super brave! There are lots of other bravery stories coming out of the Australian fires at the moment too.

    Next time you use images from the internet, make sure you attribute the image - this just means copy the link from where you found the image and put it next to the image on the poster, so we can see exactly where you found it :)

    Thanks for creative a fantastic post!
    Eliza :)

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