Thursday 31 October 2019

❓Who am I❓

Hi GUYS! This is my show don't tell character description. Can you guess who my 3 people are? comment down below.
WALT: write a character portrait.
Remember to show don't tell:
how they look, sound, smell
how they speak, move and act.
How they behave towards others.
about their belongings and the environment they are in.

First paragraph -  describe this person/character - how they look, sound, smell. This is the physical description. Show don't tell. Be specific.
Second paragraph - describe the behaviour - how they speak and act.  What makes this character unique - a laugh, a way of talking, a way of moving
Third paragraph - discuss how this character affects other people. What they do to the other characters. We are now dealing with reputation. Make the character come alive.
Fourth paragraph  - describe the character  belongings and environment.


Who am I?
1.   I slosh through the warm ocean water, my wet, bronze hair plastered to my forehead. My warm breath mingled in the air with the smell of sugar cubes and raw fish. My warm voice echoes off the water and drifts into the distance.

My mouth curls up into a smirk as I see a fish swimming in the ocean. “This will be my next meal of raw fish,” I think as the three points of my weapon spears it’s body.

I walk onto the warm shore, as I’m picked up by a hovercraft. I land into the main building and stride out, while citizens chase after me. They are grabbing my arms, trying to pull me closer, asking for an autograph. I walk out the door towards the ocean.





2.   My brown spiky hair perks up as I bite into a helpless deer. My eyes glow a golden color. I walk out of the dark woods, not making a single peep, catching a wild pig and a chipmunk on the way. I know my breath smells like blood because my family can’t resist it and decide to go hunt.

I walk to high school, waiting for another day of boring things I already know. I brace myself as I walk past more and more human beings. I try not to attack, but it’s hard. Once I enter the school doors, all the girls greet me by grinning and smiling.

I walk into the science lab, plonking down in my normal seat away from everyone. All the girls are looking my way. I sigh. Suddenly my breath is taken away as a charming girl with pale skin walks into the room. I try to see what she’s thinking, but I’m blocked. I tremble. She is irresistible. I can’t control myself, nearly attacking her. I stomp out of the room, staying away from her. She looks confused.







3.   I walk into the large double doors, my face downwards. All the children around me look disgusted and horrified at me, as if I’m as ugly as a monster. I think I am. everyone looks normal like a normal 10 year old should, except me.

I’m here to deal with the real world, people staring at me, and it sucks. I shuffle into class, a handful of kids already there. I sit at the very back of class, avoiding the glares of the kids.

Through the whole class, kids continuously turn their heads around to look at me. I look down. J____n isn’t helping either. He keeps staring at me and whispering to his mates. J__k, who is sitting next to me, tries to talk to me, but I’m not in the mood.

I feel as if I belong somewhere far far away. Away from these kids. Maybe in space, where I can fly around and enjoy every second. I can just imagine me, on a rocket, looking out through the misty window.







Sunday 13 October 2019

My brilliant holiday!

This term 3 holiday was GREAT! Here are 3 things I did.




1. I went to Game Over

On the first week of the HoLiDaY's, I went to Game Over. Game Over is a place where there is go karting, mini golf, and laser tag. With GO KARTING, I versed my older sister. I bet her by 1 lap. I did well with the mini golf in the first half, but I started going downhill  from there. I ended up being third. My favourite part was the laser tag, and I kept coming 1st. Once when some older boys came to play, I came 4th. I would recomend going there, because it was a BLAST for me. Here is the website.
http://www.gameoverauckland.co.nz/


2. I went to Rotorua

On the second week of the HOLIDAY'S, I went to Rotorua. There are lots of things I could tell you, but i'm gonna tell you one. I went to Waimangu volcanic valley. It was so cool! There were craters, and geysers, and lots of other cool stuff. This photo is from Waimangu volcanic valley. If you're going to Rotorua, make sure you stop here and take a walk. It's great.
https://www.waimangu.co.nz/

3. I finished Catching Fire



Catching fire is a book from the hunger games trilogy. It isn't exactly school appropriate, but I still LOVE it. If you're bored and you're not at school, you can take a trip to the library and order the book.

These are the 3 main things I did in the holidays. Make sure to check the link if you want and please leave a kind comment. G2G bye.