Moon landing

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Moon Landing
The tremendous ship landed on the surface of the jagged moon with a bounce. Glistening stars shone in the gloomy sky like sparkling sapphires. The delighted astronauts could see Earth as small as an ant. All seemed to be going well, but then the warning alarm on the ship sounded…
“Neil. Neil come in! Neil, we have a problem… The wind’s picking up. You two better get on the ship, or the strong wind will blow you away!”
Neil and Noah clumsily run to the spaceship, when they were blown away into the pitch black sky!
“Neil and Andrew, you get here right now.”
But it’s to late. The two helpless astronauts float away. They flounder around in the sky as they pass bright glittery stars like diamonds, numerous planets, and rocky asteroids. It would have been a perfect moment, but it wasn’t. They were floating in the middle of nowhere, and they had nowhere to go.
“What do we do?” whispered Andrew as they floated even farther from the moon.
“We could try to contact Buzz, but we might not have any connection.” replied Neil as he pulled his receiver out of his pocket. “Damn it. No radio connection.”
“ Hey look! Does that thing look like a planet Neil?” asked Andrew.
Indeed Andrew was right. Neil looked up to see a rather peculiar looking planet. It was covered with grass and little specks of what looked like oceans. It looked exactly like the Earth, but more big and magnificent.
He could see jungles that were as bright as 100W light bulbs. There were long pieces of wood flying around the planet, projecting light onto the jungle. When they flew closer, they realised the pieces of wood were actually dragons!
They were covered in beautiful patterns that shone like diamonds. They had curly horns and wings that flapped gracefully.
“Oh, My, Gosh.” exclaimed Neil. “Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh!” “OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! What in the world is this place? It looks s-s-so majestical!” screamed Neil as he started doing backflips.
“Chill Neil.” Andrew suggested as he tried to calm Neil down. “It’s one thing about looking at it, and it’s another thing landing on it.”
“Good point. I didn’t realise that.” Neil answered stupidly. “How are we gonna do it?”
“We’re gonna have to jump.” replied Andrew. “ 3...2...1… JUMP!”
With all their might, they leaped as high and as far as they could, they looked like professional long jump champions! They made it into the magnetic field and started to fall at 100 kpm! They landed in a lake with very deep water. They were safe. Well for now...